Tuesday, December 13, 2011

~ First Chapter First Paragraph Tuesday Intros ~

First Chapter First Paragraph Tuesday Intros is a weekly meme hosted by Diane at Bibliophile by the Sea every Tuesday. Share the opening paragraph (or two) of a book you've decided to read based on that paragraph. I requested an ARC of this book from the publisher through Shelf Awareness after I read about the story and then an excerpt. This is a novel about several flawed characters and their dysfunctional relationships over a period of years. These kind of books always interest me and the opening paragraphs grabbed my attention.


Don't forget to drop by Bibliophile By the Sea to read Diane's selection this week and be sure to visit and read the contributions of other participants in this fun meme!


Carry the One by Carol Anshaw

So Carmen was married, just. She sat under a huge butter moon, on a windless night in the summer of 1983, at a table, in front of the remains of some chicken cordon bleu. She looked toward the improvised dance floor where her very new husband was doing the Mexican hat dance with several other large men, three of them his brothers, other Sloans. Matt was a plodding hat-dancer; his kicks threw the others off the beat. In spite of this lack of aptitude, he was waving her over, beckoning her to join in. She waved back as though she thought he was just saying hi. She was hoping to sit out this early phase of her marriage, the mortifying dances segment.
“Don’t be discouraged. Everything will get better from here.”
This was Jean Arbuthnot, who sat next to Carmen, tapping the ash of her cigarette onto her rice pilaf. Jean and Alice, Carmen’s sister, were among the artists who had taken over this old farm in the middle of Wisconsin. Jean played and recorded traditional folk music in a workshop on the edge of the property. Alice painted in a studio that occupied half the barn.
“Bad dancer doesn’t mean anything else, does it?” Carmen said. Matt was now doing a white-guy boogie to a bad cover of “Let’s Get Physical,” shooting his hands out in an incoherent semaphore. “Like being bad at parallel parking means you’re bad in bed?” She pushed back her chair. “I’ve got to pee. This is apparently a big part of being pregnant. I didn’t know that before.”

What are your thoughts about these 2 opening paragraphs? Would you read this book based on these paragraphs?

11 comments:

  1. Very evocative paragraphs, and they get the mood of the festivities and the character's reaction to them down pat. I would definitely keep reading. Very cool post today.

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  3. I am also curious about the cover and the title. Ye, I'd keep reading...

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  4. This doesn't do much for me. I must be in a cranky mood because not many of the intros are appealing to me today. Hope you're enjoying this one though...

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  5. Oooh, I'm torn. Great writing, but there's a kind of...mood...there that I'm not sure I want to get in to! Can't wait for your review!

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  6. I think I would keep reading as I want to know why she would ask that question.

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  7. This paragraph does a good job of introducing the scene and the chatacters. It has piqued my interest.

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  8. Well, I wanted to read this book before I read this intro, and now that you've shared a little, I feel even more curious. Great pick Amy.

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  9. Oh this is a great intro! I definitely want to read more!

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  10. I think I'd probably keep reading. I hadn't heard of this one before so thanks for featuring it.

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  11. The picture I have already of these people would definitely cause me to keep reading. I'll be looking for your review of this one Amy :)

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